I Was: Final part of Chapter 4

http://mypriorlife.wordpress.com/2013/06/17/i-was-ch-4-muscle-for-love-or-meat-2/
Was a long chapter for me to write. I introduced a new character I had not planned on. I just trusted the minions that run the movies in my head and she appeared to be a character that introduces a plot twist that I had not known about.
Interesting how that happens.
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New Chapter in I Was: My Prior Life

http://mypriorlife.wordpress.com/2013/06/14/i-was4-muscle-for-love-or-meat/
Part one of four for this chapter. They’re all written. Will post them a couple days apart unless someone really wants it sooner. Took a very long time to write and came out very long. Total of all four parts is close to 9,000 words.
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Pretty please??
I dare you, double dog dare you even.
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